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1 -Task: Argumentative writing - mobile phones in school
1 +== Task: Argumentative writing - mobile phones in school ==
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3 3  Step 1: Write a complete argumentative text on the following task: 

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8 8  Step 2: Complete the following tasks so that you know what to include in an argumentative text.

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10 -1. Go through the introduction. Highlight the hook and the transition to the main body in green.
11 -1. In the main body find in each paragraph the topic sentence (red), the explanation (orange), the evidence/example (yellow) and the mini conclusion (pink) and highlight them accordingly.
10 +1. Go through the [[introduction>>doc:Main.Writing.How to write an introduction.WebHome]]. Highlight the hook and the transition to the main body in green.
11 +1. In the main body find in each paragraph the topic sentence (red), the explanation (orange), the evidence/example (yellow) and the conlcuding sentence (pink) and highlight them accordingly.
12 12  1. In the conclusion, highlight the summary (blue) as well as the outlook/solution (purple).
13 13  1. Write down all the connectors that were used.
14 14  1. Find expressions of impersonal language.
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18 +Step 3: Work with the two texts.
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20 +1. Do the same tasks with your own text.

21 +1. Compare your text with the sample solution. What is different? Is there anything you could improve?

22 +1. Now rewrite your text and include the improvements.
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24 -Below you can see what a complete composition could look like presenting different viewpoints on mobile phones in school. Read the following version and work on it step by step.
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26 -1. Complete the tasks so that you know what to include in an argumentative text.

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31 +Solution: Argumentative writing - mobile phones in school
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34 34   //“Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in school.”//
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