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1 +Task: Comment writing – social media
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3 +**Step 1:**
4 +Write a complete comment on the following task. Find at least four arguments supporting your opinion.
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6 +“Social media is everywhere. What would the world look like without.
7 +Comment on whether a world without social media would be better.”
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9 +**Step 2:**
10 +Complete the following tasks so that you know what to include in a comment.
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12 +1. Go through the introduction. Highlight the hook, the way the opinion on the topic is given and the transition to the main body in green.
13 +1. In the main body find in each paragraph the topic sentence (red), the explanation (orange), the evidence/example (yellow) and the concluding sentence (pink) and highlight them accordingly.
14 +1. In the conclusion, highlight the summary (blue) as well as the outlook (purple).
15 +1. Write down all the connectors that were used.
16 +1. Find expressions of impersonal language.
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18 +**Step 3:**
19 +Work with the two texts.
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21 +1. Do the same tasks with your own text.
22 +1. Compare your text with the sample solution. What is different? Is there anything you could improve?
23 +1. Now rewrite your text and include the improvements.
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