Wiki source code of Example task & solution comment writing
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| 1 | Task: Comment writing – social media | ||
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| 3 | **Step 1:** | ||
| 4 | Write a complete comment on the following task. Find at least four arguments supporting your opinion. | ||
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| 6 | “Social media is everywhere. What would the world look like without. | ||
| 7 | Comment on whether a world without social media would be better.” | ||
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| 9 | **Step 2:** | ||
| 10 | Complete the following tasks so that you know what to include in a comment. | ||
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| 12 | 1. Go through the introduction. Highlight the hook, the way the opinion on the topic is given and the transition to the main body in green. | ||
| 13 | 1. In the main body find in each paragraph the topic sentence (red), the explanation (orange), the evidence/example (yellow) and the concluding sentence (pink) and highlight them accordingly. | ||
| 14 | 1. In the conclusion, highlight the summary (blue) as well as the outlook (purple). | ||
| 15 | 1. Write down all the connectors that were used. | ||
| 16 | 1. Find expressions of impersonal language. | ||
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| 18 | **Step 3:** | ||
| 19 | Work with the two texts. | ||
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| 21 | 1. Do the same tasks with your own text. | ||
| 22 | 1. Compare your text with the sample solution. What is different? Is there anything you could improve? | ||
| 23 | 1. Now rewrite your text and include the improvements. |