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Last modified by Christina Chatwell on 2026/04/28 13:35
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... ... @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ 1 1 **Topic**: 2 -//Social media is everywhere .What would the world look like without.2 +//Social media is everywhere - what would the world look like without. 3 3 Comment on whether a world without social media would be better.// 4 4 5 5 In today’s digital age, social media has become an inseparable part of everyday life. Platforms such as Instagram, TikTok, Facebook, and X (formerly Twitter) have changed the way people communicate, share ideas, and see the world. For some, social media represents progress — a tool that connects people across continents and gives everyone a voice. For others, social media symbolizes many of society’s modern problems, such as misinformation, addiction, and the decline of real human interaction. The question of whether the world would be a better place without social media is complex, as these platforms bring both great opportunities and serious challenges. ... ... @@ -17,5 +17,5 @@ 17 17 18 18 **//Finally//**, social media provides a strong sense of community and support. Many people **//find comfort in//** online groups where they can share experiences and seek advice. Support communities exist for nearly every topic—from mental health and parenting to hobbies and education. **//For instance//**, someone struggling with anxiety might join a Facebook group where members share coping strategies and encouragement. Social media **//also//** helps organize community events and social movements, bringing people together for common goals and causes. **//This creates//** a sense of belonging and connection among users worldwide. 19 19 20 -**//In conclusion//**, social media has many advantages that make them an important part of modern life **//thus//** making the world a better place. It connects people, spreads information, supports businesses, encourages creativity, and builds supportive communities. While social media should be used responsibly, it remains a powerful tool that brings people closer together and by doing so creating a better world. 20 +**//In conclusion//**, social media has many advantages that make them an important part of modern life **//thus//** making the world a better place. It connects people, spreads information, supports businesses, encourages creativity, and builds supportive communities. While social media should be used responsibly, it remains a powerful tool that brings people closer together and **//by doing so//** creating a better world. 21 21