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| 3 | |1. **The question arises** whether mobile phones should be allowed in schools at all.|X| | ||
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10.1 | 4 | |2. **Firstly**, mobile phones give students quick access to information.** Another significant benefit** is that they can be used as learning tools.|X| |
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7.1 | 5 | |3. Mobile phones can distract students during lessons. **For instance**, this is a very serious problem that schools must solve immediately. |
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12.1 | 6 | //Why wrong: For instance must introduce a specific example, not a general statement. |
| 7 | Better: For instance, students often check social media instead of listening to the teacher.//||X | ||
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1.1 | 8 | |4. Students use their phones to look up words and check grammar. **Consequently**, their writing skills can improve significantly.|X| |
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8.1 | 9 | |5. **In conclusion**, one major issue is that phones make it easy to cheat during tests. |
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13.1 | 10 | //Why wrong: In conclusion introduces the final summary of the essay. It cannot be used in the middle to introduce a single argument. |
| 11 | Better: One major issue is that phones make it easy to cheat during tests//||X | ||
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11.1 | 12 | |6. Some schools have banned phones completely. **To illustrate this point**, studies show that banning phones can raise average test scores by up to 6%.|X| |
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14.1 | 13 | |7. Phones help students stay in touch with their parents. **In addition**, they can be useful in emergencies.|X| |
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8.1 | 14 | |8. Many students spend too much time on their phones during breaks. **Therefore**, looking at the positive side, there are clear benefits too. |
| 15 | //Why wrong: Therefore signals a logical consequence. It cannot introduce a contrasting point. Better: On the other hand, there are also clear advantages.//||X | ||
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1.1 | 16 | |9. **A significant disadvantage** of mobile phones in school is the risk of cyberbullying.|X| |
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15.1 | 17 | |10. Phones cause distraction and enable cheating. **In a nutshell**, schools need clear rules about when and how phones may be used.|X| |