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Last modified by Edyta Rethfeldt on 2026/04/28 14:30
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To version 2.1
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1 -**Possible Solution**
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3 -"Is Social Media Really That Bad?"
3 +**Social Media and Teenagers**
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5 +In my opinion **,** social media is very bad. Many teenagers --uses-- **use** it --everyday-- **every day** and it --have-- **has** a big influence --to-- **on** their --life-- **lives**. You must --not to spend-- **not spend** too much time online. Also**** it is important that students are checking → check their phones less frequently.
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7 +For example**,** many young people --scrolls-- **scroll** for hours and they --don't doing-- **don't do** their homework. That is a serious problem. In addition**,** social media can --makes-- **make** you feel bad because you are comparing yourself --with-- **to** others.
8 +In conclusion **,** I think it is important to reduce the --usage of-- **use of** social media. What is your opinion about this topic? Write it in the comments.
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13 +**Is Social Media Really That Bad?**
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5 5  Let's be honest — most of us use social media every day. But have you ever wondered if it's actually good for us?
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7 7  In my opinion, social media can be a problem if we use it too much. A lot of teens spend hours online, and it really affects their daily life. For example, I sometimes start scrolling and suddenly I realise I haven't done my homework yet.