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Last modified by Martina Wagner on 2026/04/28 13:39
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edited by Edyta Rethfeldt
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1 -{{exercise id="Common mistakes" source="AG Englisch"}}
2 -//Read the blog entry below. There are at least 10 mistakes. Underline or highlight them, then correct them.//
1 +{{exercise id="Find the mistakes" source="AG Englisch" level="b"}}
2 +//Find the mistakes (13 Rechtschreibfehler und 14 Grammatikfehler).//
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4 -"Social Media and Teenagers"
4 +**Pros and cons of social media**
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6 +Social media has become a central part of modern live, influencing who people comunicate, share information, and spend there free time. Platforms like Instagram, TikTok, and Facebook connect billions of users worldwide. During social media offers many advantages, it also rises important concerns that should not be ignored.
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8 +One mayor advantage of social media are it's ability to connect people across long distances. Friends and family can stay in touch regardles of where they live, and it is easyer than ever to obtain relationships. In addition, social media provides quick access to informations, and news. Users can stay updated on global events in real time and learn about topics who interest them.
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10 +A nother benefit is that social media gives individuals a platform for self-expression. People can share their opinions, creativity, and talents with a wide audience. It can also be useful for education and career opportunities, as many businesses and professionals use these platforms for networking and promotion.
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12 +However, it gives also significant disadvantages. One major issue is the impact on mental health. Constant comparison with others, cyberbullying, and the pressure to present a perfect life can lead to anxiety and low self-esteem. Furthermore, social media can be addiction, caused people to spent excessive amounts of time online instead of focusing on real-life responsibilities.
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14 +Another concern is the spread of misinformation. Fals news and misleading content can spread quick, making it difficult for users to distinguish between reliable and unreliable sources. Privacy is also at risk, as personal data can be collected and misused from companies or hackers.
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16 +In conclusion, social media has positive and negative effects both. It connect people, provides information, and creates opportunitys, but it can also harm mental health, spread misinformation, and threatens privacy. Therefore, it is important to use social media responsible and be aware of it's potenzial risks while benefiting from its advantageous.
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20 +{{exercise id="Common mistakes" source="AG Englisch" level="b"}}
21 +//Read the blog entry below. There are at least 10 mistakes. Underline or highlight them, then correct them.//
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23 +**Social Media and Teenagers**
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6 6  In my opinion social media is very bad. Many teenagers uses it everyday and it have a big influence to their life. You must not to spend too much time online. Also it is important that students are checking their phones less frequently.
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8 8  For example many young people scrolls for hours and they don't doing their homework. That is a serious problem. In addition social media can makes you feel bad because you are comparing yourself with others.