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Last modified by Martina Wagner on 2026/04/28 13:39
From version 5.1
edited by Edyta Rethfeldt
on 2026/04/28 09:06
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To version 8.1
edited by Martina Wagner
on 2026/04/28 13:39
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1 -{{exercise id="Common mistakes" source="AG Englisch"}}
2 -//Read the blog entry below. There are at least 10 mistakes. Underline or highlight them, then correct them.//
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4 -**Social Media and Teenagers**
1 +{{exercise id="Find the mistakes" source="AG Englisch" level="b"}}
2 +//Find the mistakes (13 Rechtschreibfehler und 14 Grammatikfehler).//
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6 -In my opinion social media is very bad. Many teenagers uses it everyday and it have a big influence to their life. You must not to spend too much time online. Also it is important that students are checking their phones less frequently.
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8 -For example many young people scrolls for hours and they don't doing their homework. That is a serious problem. In addition social media can makes you feel bad because you are comparing yourself with others.
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10 -In conclusion I think it is important to reduce the usage of social media. What is your opinion about this topic? Write it in the comments.
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13 -{{exercise id="Find the mistakes" source="AG Englisch"}}
14 -Find the mistakes (13 Rechtschreibfehler und 14 Grammatikfehler)
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16 16  **Pros and cons of social media**
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18 18  Social media has become a central part of modern live, influencing who people comunicate, share information, and spend there free time. Platforms like Instagram, TikTok, and Facebook connect billions of users worldwide. During social media offers many advantages, it also rises important concerns that should not be ignored.
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28 28  In conclusion, social media has positive and negative effects both. It connect people, provides information, and creates opportunitys, but it can also harm mental health, spread misinformation, and threatens privacy. Therefore, it is important to use social media responsible and be aware of it's potenzial risks while benefiting from its advantageous.
29 29  {{/exercise}}
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20 +{{exercise id="Common mistakes" source="AG Englisch" level="b"}}
21 +//Read the blog entry below. There are at least 10 mistakes. Underline or highlight them, then correct them.//
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23 +**Social Media and Teenagers**
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25 +In my opinion social media is very bad. Many teenagers uses it everyday and it have a big influence to their life. You must not to spend too much time online. Also it is important that students are checking their phones less frequently.
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27 +For example many young people scrolls for hours and they don't doing their homework. That is a serious problem. In addition social media can makes you feel bad because you are comparing yourself with others.
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29 +In conclusion I think it is important to reduce the usage of social media. What is your opinion about this topic? Write it in the comments.
30 +{{/exercise}}