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3 3  **Social Media and Teenagers**
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5 -In my opinion**,** social media is very bad. Many teenagers --uses-- **use** it --everyday-- **every day** and it --have-- **has** a big influence --to-- **on** their --life-- **lives**. You must --not to spend-- **not spend** too much time online. Also**** it is important that students are checking → check their phones less frequently.
5 +In my opinion **,** social media is very bad. Many teenagers --uses-- **use** it --everyday-- **every day** and it --have-- **has** a big influence --to-- **on** their --life-- **lives**. You must --not to spend-- **not spend** too much time online. Also**** it is important that students are checking → check their phones less frequently.
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7 7  For example**,** many young people --scrolls-- **scroll** for hours and they --don't doing-- **don't do** their homework. That is a serious problem. In addition**,** social media can --makes-- **make** you feel bad because you are comparing yourself --with-- **to** others.
8 8  In conclusion **,** I think it is important to reduce the --usage of-- **use of** social media. What is your opinion about this topic? Write it in the comments.