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Edyta Rethfeldt 3.1 1 //Possible solutions - mistake spotting//
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Edyta Rethfeldt 3.1 3 **Social Media and Teenagers**
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Edyta Rethfeldt 4.1 5 In my opinion **,** social media is very bad. Many teenagers --uses-- **use** it --everyday-- **every day** and it --have-- **has** a big influence --to-- **on** their --life-- **lives**. You must --not to spend-- **not spend** too much time online. Also**** it is important that students are checking → check their phones less frequently.
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7 For example**,** many young people --scrolls-- **scroll** for hours and they --don't doing-- **don't do** their homework. That is a serious problem. In addition**,** social media can --makes-- **make** you feel bad because you are comparing yourself --with-- **to** others.
8 In conclusion **,** I think it is important to reduce the --usage of-- **use of** social media. What is your opinion about this topic? Write it in the comments.
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Edyta Rethfeldt 2.1 12 **Is Social Media Really That Bad?**
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14 Let's be honest — most of us use social media every day. But have you ever wondered if it's actually good for us?
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16 In my opinion, social media can be a problem if we use it too much. A lot of teens spend hours online, and it really affects their daily life. For example, I sometimes start scrolling and suddenly I realise I haven't done my homework yet.
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18 Another issue is comparison. When you see perfect pictures all the time, it's easy to feel bad about yourself. I've experienced that too, and it can be really stressful.
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20 So what can we do? I think we should try to spend less time online and focus more on real life. Maybe start with small steps, like putting your phone away while studying.
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22 What about you? Do you think social media is more helpful or harmful? Let me know in the comments!