Hint Paragraph rewrite

Here are some tips that could help you:

• Use I/ you / we
• Add feelings and everyday language
• Write shorter sentences
• Connect with your readers

Here are some helpful starters:

•  Let's be honest...
• The truth is...
• We all know the feeling when...

Here are some useful (also informal) words:

• awesome
• cool
• super
• important
• scrolling
• real life